rolf. I love those first few steps Pierre takes when he tries to get away, the exageration is great. however, after he stops to look up at her I think he needs to get off screen fast, maybe even with just a smear, otherwise it's not very funny when suzzette chases him because really, by their relative paces we can tell she'd catch him about an inch off screen. also, moving him at the same pace just feels too even and it deadens the joke somewhat for me.
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rolf. I love those first few steps Pierre takes when he tries to get away, the exageration is great. however, after he stops to look up at her I think he needs to get off screen fast, maybe even with just a smear, otherwise it's not very funny when suzzette chases him because really, by their relative paces we can tell she'd catch him about an inch off screen. also, moving him at the same pace just feels too even and it deadens the joke somewhat for me.
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