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This is the first pass of Mrs Featherbottom flying into the window while Chloe is admiring the tea party she threw together. At this point I'm looking for critique on timing and poses, not so much the movement between the poses.
posted by David Suroviec at 12:02 AM
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dave, after she turns quick to look at the bird when she looks away from it for a second, i'd make that a pretty slow turn instead of a quick one. it'll contrast how quickly she turns to look at it both times. but that's just me. lookin nice
I like how you're using her eye darts in this shot. They're funny and convey some personality. I wonder if you might want to rearrange some of the stuff in front of Chloe on the table- its a little hard to see her silhouette with the teapot and that other thing there. I think the poses are good and I agree with Joe about the second head turn being slower.
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