Wednesday, March 29, 2006

hows it look

heres a shot ive been working. hows it look?


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4 Comments:

Blogger Davipalooza said...

if you step through it frame by frame you can see the pops. Pierre somehow gets closer to the camera when he gets hit in a very large increment, so his head looks like it grows twice the size. this looks a bit funny. and suzie is almost 180 degrees past the contact point before pierre ever starts to move. Her tail goes right through him. And don't let him anticipate the hit. Let pierre react.

11:42 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks Dave - I was going for a big reaction on Pierre where his gut flies back and his head flies forward for a few frames...the timing on it is wierd right now though and it might just not work. I'll go back and try something else with it.

6:12 AM  
Blogger Yavuz said...

looks very cool. Keep up posting;)

6:38 AM  
Blogger geenpool said...

it's a very nice beginning...just needs a lot of noodling..but that's the fun part. I like the idea of the head flying forward, but maybe instead of flying forward, it should stay where it is while the body flies back...also, the camera angle just might be good for that gag...and maybe a bit of an antic on the mouse...other than that...i'd prolly speed up the timing a bit...a little more held poses with a bit of quick movements...but that's just my opinion...and who am i you might ask...adorable if you ask my mom....anyway...nice work...keep on pluggin' away at it and it'll be cake! I'm shutting up now.

11:00 AM  

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